Murder

[Rockjaw]

This is just a little poem that popped into my head. Its not long enough though. So I think I am goin to work on another stanza. Its basically what I feel every time I get in a fight.
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Bloody Murder in My Head

Somewhere beyond happiness and behind all sadness
I'm lost in my attack, I'm giving in to madness
I feel I need the blood the gore and then the pain
And thus revel in the pleasure of what I could gain

Those faces in my head say things to me
They’ll all soon die and then they’ll see
Inside I feel the rage of an animal
I crave the rush for it makes me feel full
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Edit: I added the second stanza so I guess it is done.

[mathmission]

Im interested to see where you take this..

[Rockjaw]

Im interested to see where you take this..

I've been toying with verses in my head for a companion to this peice so there may be another poem in here soon. I'm thinking something along the lines of the Calm After The Storm.